Dave Cryer, Cave Dryer

Meadow, midriff, mountain:
Here's a strip of fountainous female
Throwing her drops upon me
From a sidelong glance.

Headgoes, midswift, howsay:
Here's a drip of bountyplus nature
Showing her threepart to me -
Forms my step to dance.

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• #5 Comment from southernmush 
  20/07/06 02:26 | Permalink

  Hi Dave !!!!!!!
  
  This poem is beautiful and it is a big reason why I come to visit your journal. I so love your writing. Thanks for sharing this. Take care.
• #4 Comment from rachealcarol 
  18/07/06 20:38 | Permalink

  Breathtakingly beautiful Dave, wonderful words. Rache
• #3 Comment from labdancer51 
  18/07/06 20:05 | Permalink

  That`s lovely Dave. :o)
  
  Sandra x
• #2 Comment from amy122389 
  18/07/06 18:01 | Permalink

  GORGEOUS!  I can imagine my dog bounding through the meadow like a rabbit...  :)
  
  ~Amy
• #1 Comment from nhd106 
  18/07/06 16:30 | Permalink

  Beautiful...simply beautiful.
  
  Nancy
  http://journals.aol.com/nhd106/Nancyluvspix/entries/1240